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A/N: Came up with this after my boyfriend did this last night. He kinda reminds me of Lud sometimes and I never expected this out of him, so yeah, story was born!

You were sitting home alone. It was right after a fight with your long time boyfriend, Ludwig. It's not that big of a deal, you two did fight quite a bit, but always made up, however tonight was your one year anniversary. Right now, you just wanted to be left alone. You curled yourself up into a ball on the couch as you listened to a movie.

Just starting to feel sleep creep upon you, the doorbell rang. You looked at the clock. 8:30pm. Sure it wasn't that late, but you still wondered who it was. Walking to the door, you opened it.

"Hello?" You called looking around, seeing no one.

Glancing down you saw a white rose laying on the porch. Looking at the flower, you knelt down to examine it. Upon closer inspection, you saw a white note card attached to it.

"White- Is for the times we fight, knowing somehow we will make things right." Is what it read.

Smiling you took the flower inside and grabbed a small vase to put it in. You were just adding water when the bell rang again. You once more made your way to the door. However, no one was there, but a red rose was laying in place of the white one.

"Red- Is for the "I love you"s I should have said, and the tears I'll make sure you never shed." Is what this one's card said.

You could feel a special feeling growing inside. This is by far one of the sweetest things he's done for you. You walked back into your house and placed it in with the vase with the white rose.

Turning to go back into the living room, another ringing made you turn around and go to the front porch. A black rose was resting in the same spot. Once again, this flower had a tag attached to the stem as well.

"Black- Is for the times we got off track, and for all the fears that we beat back."

Walking closer to the edge of the stoop, you looked around. You knew someone had to be around to be placing these roses there every few minutes. When you didn't see anyone, you assumed this was the last flower, and walked back into the house. This was not like Ludwig to do something like this, but you did appreciate the flowers.

No sooner were you in, the doorbell rang, again. Same thing has happened, another rose, in a different color. This one was pink.

"Pink- Is for the first bar drink, and how our hearts beat in sync."

You started to walk around the house. Someone had to be close by, but you couldn't figure out where. There was no vehicle in your driveway, or any odd one at any of the surrounding houses. As you walked back to your door, there was a yellow rose on the ground.

"Yellow- Is for how much you mean to this fellow." It was short and sweet.

Slowly, opening the door, you took one last look behind you. When you didn't see anyone, you pushed the door open and entered. Not looking in front of you, you ran into something hard. Looking up you saw it was Ludwig. He wrapped you up in his strong arms and held you close to him. You wrapped your arms around his shoulders, standing on your toes.

Letting you go he kissed the side of your cheek and gave you one last rose. This one was blue. On it was another note card.

"Blue- Is so you know my heart belongs with you, forever yours, I'll remain true."

You looked up into his blue eyes and felt a tear form in yours. The way his cerulean orbs gazed into your (eye color) ones made you know for sure he meant every word he wrote on those flower cards.

"I love you, too," Was what you whispered in his ear as you wrapped him in a hug, again.

"Ich liebe dich, auch." Ludwig whispered in your ear as well.

You two had the best night of your relationship. Sure it started out rough, but it became sweet. With Ludwig, you knew the night was probably going to end the same way.

A/N: Well, I hope you enjoyed this. Please comment and/or critique they make me happy.
Yeah got the idea after my bf did this after we had a little fight on our anniversary, last night. At times he does remind me of Ludwig so that's why I chose him and not another country for this. Enjoy peoples. Always remember I do take request for stories.
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sonichetaliafan97 Mar 25, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
it was really sweet~
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darkraitheruler Feb 13, 2014  Student Artist
I thought black rose means death?
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E-Sane Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ur soooo lucky. I wish I had a boyfriend that cared so much. Or one at all.
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seffykoepsel Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
your boyfriend did this?! you lucky bitch! damn, wish i had a guy who was a sweet heart like that.
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BrimThePyscho Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconthefeelsplz: Amazing. Just. Just amazing. :iconclapplz:
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:iconpayday892:
It's...beautiful. *wipes away a tear*
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:iconpirate-kitty1220:
OMG..this is like, the sweetest thing....EVERRR X3
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vdkstar Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
so sweet ^.^ ~<3
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Sushi-Cutie Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Could you make a romano story? A nice and real long one with a good plot, jealousy, a tear jerking confession, romance, fluff, and the like. I like long and heartfelt confessions, using the sweetest of words. And jealousy is da BEST!!!^O^ I also love tsunderes. EXTREMELY love tsunderes. The more jealousy, the better the story. I don't like when the reader or character date or have dated other people, I don't like when they tip towards others or cheat, I'm not a huge fan of swearing, I dislike when they don't end up dating in the end (even if they get close to it), I also hate when they skimp out on the kisses and romancey crap. It's SO lame when I read a CanadaxReader and all I get is one small kiss. :( I feel like I have to freaking JUMP the poor boy. Do I really need to tackle him to get something? Though I'm not one to do anything "too serious" before marriage, I'd still kiss and do certain things with our clothes still on... *cough* xD
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