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A/N: Came up with this after my boyfriend did this last night. He kinda reminds me of Lud sometimes and I never expected this out of him, so yeah, story was born!

You were sitting home alone. It was right after a fight with your long time boyfriend, Ludwig. It's not that big of a deal, you two did fight quite a bit, but always made up, however tonight was your one year anniversary. Right now, you just wanted to be left alone. You curled yourself up into a ball on the couch as you listened to a movie.

Just starting to feel sleep creep upon you, the doorbell rang. You looked at the clock. 8:30pm. Sure it wasn't that late, but you still wondered who it was. Walking to the door, you opened it.

"Hello?" You called looking around, seeing no one.

Glancing down you saw a white rose laying on the porch. Looking at the flower, you knelt down to examine it. Upon closer inspection, you saw a white note card attached to it.

"White- Is for the times we fight, knowing somehow we will make things right." Is what it read.

Smiling you took the flower inside and grabbed a small vase to put it in. You were just adding water when the bell rang again. You once more made your way to the door. However, no one was there, but a red rose was laying in place of the white one.

"Red- Is for the "I love you"s I should have said, and the tears I'll make sure you never shed." Is what this one's card said.

You could feel a special feeling growing inside. This is by far one of the sweetest things he's done for you. You walked back into your house and placed it in with the vase with the white rose.

Turning to go back into the living room, another ringing made you turn around and go to the front porch. A black rose was resting in the same spot. Once again, this flower had a tag attached to the stem as well.

"Black- Is for the times we got off track, and for all the fears that we beat back."

Walking closer to the edge of the stoop, you looked around. You knew someone had to be around to be placing these roses there every few minutes. When you didn't see anyone, you assumed this was the last flower, and walked back into the house. This was not like Ludwig to do something like this, but you did appreciate the flowers.

No sooner were you in, the doorbell rang, again. Same thing has happened, another rose, in a different color. This one was pink.

"Pink- Is for the first bar drink, and how our hearts beat in sync."

You started to walk around the house. Someone had to be close by, but you couldn't figure out where. There was no vehicle in your driveway, or any odd one at any of the surrounding houses. As you walked back to your door, there was a yellow rose on the ground.

"Yellow- Is for how much you mean to this fellow." It was short and sweet.

Slowly, opening the door, you took one last look behind you. When you didn't see anyone, you pushed the door open and entered. Not looking in front of you, you ran into something hard. Looking up you saw it was Ludwig. He wrapped you up in his strong arms and held you close to him. You wrapped your arms around his shoulders, standing on your toes.

Letting you go he kissed the side of your cheek and gave you one last rose. This one was blue. On it was another note card.

"Blue- Is so you know my heart belongs with you, forever yours, I'll remain true."

You looked up into his blue eyes and felt a tear form in yours. The way his cerulean orbs gazed into your (eye color) ones made you know for sure he meant every word he wrote on those flower cards.

"I love you, too," Was what you whispered in his ear as you wrapped him in a hug, again.

"Ich liebe dich, auch." Ludwig whispered in your ear as well.

You two had the best night of your relationship. Sure it started out rough, but it became sweet. With Ludwig, you knew the night was probably going to end the same way.

A/N: Well, I hope you enjoyed this. Please comment and/or critique they make me happy.
Yeah got the idea after my bf did this after we had a little fight on our anniversary, last night. At times he does remind me of Ludwig so that's why I chose him and not another country for this. Enjoy peoples. Always remember I do take request for stories.
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iloveleviackerman200 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015  New member
*sitting in corner reading about ppls love life and I just kno it will never happen to me* 😂😂 but nice bf ur lucky 💕
RingoDe-Mingo Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015
This is the most cutest story I ever read. You're a lucky lady

 Pikachu want it 
Whybot221 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015
wolfiee52 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
your boyfriend did that?! AWWW HOW SWEET!
Madison-Stark Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
aww! Kawaii!!!!!!!!!!!1
FairyTail4ever3454 Featured By Owner Edited Sep 7, 2014  Student Artist
Awwwhhhh this was so sweet! I really love this.... And also, you have a wonderful boyfriend Mossy-chan! :D

Sushi-Cutie Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hee hee, guys don't realize what suckers some of us girls are for this sweet flowery stuff.
HetaliaLover20 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
SO FLUFFY Agnesplz colored 
LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww that is so sweet!
thelittlemermello Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Man what I wouldn't give to have my crush do something like this for me...Eurritimia Forever Alone Foreveralone carrot icon Crazy Girl (Forever Alone) [V6] 
Iggy-Chans-Girl Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:iconhappytearsplz: sooooooooooooooooooo kawaiiiiiiiii!!!
carterrico99 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
You are so lucky to have a boyfriend like that ! I WANT ONE !!! 😭😭😭
sassy3dcat Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
aww that was cute

you said your boyfriend did that to you? thats cute
lettheworldbreath Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Way too cute. Thought I as gonna vomit rainbows I swear! Your bf is frikken GENIUS MAN. YOU'RE SO LUCKY. HOW ROMANTIC!!! <3
Mochi-and-2P-Rose Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it was really sweet~
darkraitheruler Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Student Artist
I thought black rose means death?
FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
E-Sane Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ur soooo lucky. I wish I had a boyfriend that cared so much. Or one at all.
seffykoepsel Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
your boyfriend did this?! you lucky bitch! damn, wish i had a guy who was a sweet heart like that.
BrimThePyscho Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconthefeelsplz: Amazing. Just. Just amazing. :iconclapplz:
payday892 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013
It's...beautiful. *wipes away a tear*
pirate-kitty1220 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
OMG..this is like, the sweetest thing....EVERRR X3
vdkstar Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
so sweet ^.^ ~<3
Sushi-Cutie Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Could you make a romano story? A nice and real long one with a good plot, jealousy, a tear jerking confession, romance, fluff, and the like. I like long and heartfelt confessions, using the sweetest of words. And jealousy is da BEST!!!^O^ I also love tsunderes. EXTREMELY love tsunderes. The more jealousy, the better the story. I don't like when the reader or character date or have dated other people, I don't like when they tip towards others or cheat, I'm not a huge fan of swearing, I dislike when they don't end up dating in the end (even if they get close to it), I also hate when they skimp out on the kisses and romancey crap. It's SO lame when I read a CanadaxReader and all I get is one small kiss. :( I feel like I have to freaking JUMP the poor boy. Do I really need to tackle him to get something? Though I'm not one to do anything "too serious" before marriage, I'd still kiss and do certain things with our clothes still on... *cough* xD
Sushi-Cutie Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This was nice. If my boyfriend did this, I would have tears in my eyes and hug him tight~!!!^O^ If he asked me to marry him on the spot, I would probably say yes. xD
KalixSnow Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013
How sweet!
Singing-Wolf-12 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Your boyfriend is wanted by every girl who has read this. Keep an eye on him.
Anyways, this is a very sweet story! I like it~!
ASK-Anatai Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist
Am I the only one that moticed the implication at the end of that?
FilipinaHetalian Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh mein gott. I am not alone.
ASK-Anatai Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist
XD I'm glad to hear the same. I was worried I had imagined something there.
FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I was thinking, "Well, that's a VERY short summary."
FeliciaDaisyVarags Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lynne9123 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:happytearsplz: :loveloveplz:
Singing-Wolf-12 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
You need to add the word "icon" in between the : and the thing the icon is, like : iconloveloveplz : - but without spaces - to make :iconloveloveplz:
lynne9123 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh,okay,thank you!
Singing-Wolf-12 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
No problem~! :)
IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lucky you Mossy-sama! I hope everything stays good for you and that you keep writing~
AmIProdigy Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aaaaaaw your bf is a sweet heart! Hes a keeper chica!
GermanysGirl16 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
InvaderCye Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Student Artist
what a darling story, you`re a very lucky last to have a boyfriend that sweet
MySweetLies Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
Your boyfriend is amazing!!

Tell him to...
Jinx-Kuran14 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
I'm crying tears of love. So touching. I hope you and your bf have a happy relationship.
Insane-Angel13 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
InkQueenPilus Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG :D that's so cute! I wish I had a guy that would do stuff for me like this >u< mmmmmmmmm I can't stop awing! Your so lucky =3
thunderbuddy69 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ahhh how i wish Ludwig was real! :iconhappytearsplz:
QuxxnAri Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
LUCKY :iconloveloveplz:
HetaliaRules99 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
that's so sweet! your so lucky he sounds like a keeper!!!!
furchild1204 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wait.. your boyfriend actually did this?? Awesome! You're so lucky!
Raya718 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your so lucky to have a guy like that I'm single right now but I just ended a relationship a few months ago and he wrote me tiny poems and left them at my desk or in my locker but that was about it
this is so cute
keep up the good work
RoyEdAl221 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
OMG! That's sooooo sweet! I wish my boyfriend would do this for me XD
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